Delia's Tattoo New Design

The new tattoo design for my character from the Earthsong RPG Mutants ->>[link]
Well since the text thing just didn't translate into a good tattoo when shrunk down i reworked everything but the origional line art.
First i shrunk it down a bit and then just changed the way i filled in the dragon and pheonix. I actually think i like this version much more. Something about it clicks better. I'm tempted to go back to the origional size and fill it in in a similar manner (eventually).
anyways i hope you like. I'll post the Delia as she stands now, with this tattoo, in my scraps gallery
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Please let me know what you think.